Tuesday, October 9, 2012

THE LONG SLEEK RED CAR



in the shade of a leafy peepal tree
with haughty demeanor
glowing basking
with the loving care
bestowed upon it
stood the long sleek car
a veritable queen
of the street

the glossy body painted
a nail varnish red
tinted windows
glinting in the bright sunshine
piercing through the leaves
of the peepal tree

a passing street dog
walking busily by
rough haired unkempt uncouth
the colour of the mud
in which it was born
in which it lives
in which it will die
one day some day
unremarked unnoticed unseen
his existence
a redundant incident
stopped with sudden interest
in the middle of a pesky itch
by this sleek shiny red car
glittering in the sun
trespassing there at
one of his addresses
under the leafy peepal
on his everyday street

he stepped curiously up
to the shiny car
his nose twitching
and nosed its long sleek body
intently smelling some doggy messages
Sniff Sniff Sniff Sniff

following the thorough investigation
he sidled up close
to the long sleek red car
lifted a scruffy hind leg
and nonchalantly spurted it
with an arching
honey yellow stream

giving it another sniff or two
and without much further ado
he trotted busily on
without a backward glance -
the flowing garbage bin beckoned
with its delectable bouquet of smells
a banquet fit for the veritable
prince of the streets -
rough haired unkempt uncouth
the street his home his abode
his own familiar own

a curious crow sitting
on a branch of the leafy peepal
who had witnessed with interest
the scene below
peering through the leaves
his beady eye cocked to the side
flapped his wings and said
Kaak Kaak Kaak Kaak

-by Rita Putatunda

5 comments:

  1. nice, simple n unique.. :-) kinda cool..

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  2. very good observation indeed and vividly xpressed too. wat disdain for material things of life by an animal. for him the food in bin is more important then the sleek car,and the last kaak kaak as if crow cheering on the dog for his act :)

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    1. Yeah.. you understood perfectly, especially the crow's kaak kaak - thank you, Subodh-ji :)

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  3. Wow!!!! Simply superb!! Eloquent and amazing... !

    ---Ash_K-Dube

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